WALT use precise nouns to add detail for our reader

This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my mum.We went to the takeaway to get some chips.We also went to look for a phone for my Ally birthday.I had to choose between a Phone and a barbie .After that we went to the number one to buy high heels mum took me to the dairy  to buy an lollies.Luck me?

Ka Kite

From;Vonairay

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